Öte yandan bu şiire yazdığınız yorumdan esinlenerek bulmuş olduğum video, başlığı ve konusu ile oldukça uyumlu idi. Katkılarınıza çok tşk..

This old man

This old man, he played one,
He played knick-knack on my thumb;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played two,
He played knick-knack on my shoe;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played three,
He played knick-knack on my knee;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played four,
He played knick-knack on my door;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played five,
He played knick-knack on my hive;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played six,
He played knick-knack on my sticks;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played seven,
He played knick-knack up in heaven;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played eight,
He played knick-knack on my gate;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played nine,
He played knick-knack on my spine;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home.

This old man, he played ten,
He played knick-knack once again;
With a knick-knack paddywhack,
Give the dog a bone,
This old man came rolling home

elbette ki; reşit olanlarla ve orta yaşlardaki bireylerin yakınsamaları konu edilmişti bu mütevâzı şiirde..

diğerleri ise, toplumun bir yarası olmaya devam ediyor maâlesef efendim..

paylaşımınız için çok teşekkürler.. selamla.
Orhan_Tİ

evet abi, durum böyle işte... sevdin mi, zamanında seveceksin; yahut adam gibi yoluna... çok çok teşekkürler


okunma oranı için de, dostlarımıza tşk..

selamla.

çok çok teşekkürler efendim
toplumsal içerikle donatılmış geri bildiriminiz için..

saygılarımla.